Almost there...
The message is there, you picked the right song--but let's step away from the stick figures. I haven't seen your other work but this is pretty good so I have confidence that you CAN do more than sticks.
Almost there...
The message is there, you picked the right song--but let's step away from the stick figures. I haven't seen your other work but this is pretty good so I have confidence that you CAN do more than sticks.
Really...
Okay, look, I'm well aware that you have the last say here but I'm not here to insult you. You have some skill in flash. As a matter of fact you have too much skill to be wasting on such childish antics. I could tell that you're very young by all of your voices--that's why I'm going easy on you with the insults. But honestly, guys, when you have to incorporate the word "poop" in your flash animations, there's something wrong or your mom is standing behind you. Don't get me wrong--I don't want you to turn out your next flash with the word shit smeared all over it. In fact, I just think you'd do well to step away from feces.
Feces is normal, natural and everyone does it. Why, oh, why do you find it humorous to make a full length flash about? I know that you're young and I'm hoping really hard that you'll find maturity so you can turn out a flash to be proud of some day. But honestly, you will get older despite whether or not you actually grow up. Do you really think you'll look back on this flash as a father and say "wow, what an accomplishment!" You can do better.
Sorry. :( I didnt mean to upset you in any way. I will tell you now that I didnt write any dialog. I just animated it. I do have a newseires up. I will leave you a link to its episode intro. http://www.deviantart.com/view/23043327/ So if you want you could check it out.
You deserve individual marks
Okay, first off, let me say--to each his own. While I disagree with your distasteful way of promoting self esteem issues among women, I support your right to do so. As for your ratings...
Fat--On average, I do not giggle at the immaturity behind ultraviolence using machine guns. Especially when those machine guns (and or riffles) are geared toward defenseless animals (I was once called a peace loving hippy in a review of mine) but this was humorous. I think humor in violence has a lot to do with timing and effort. You put decent effort into this quasi-sprite and I enjoyed it. You get a 3/5 (That's a pretty high score coming from me since this was not a movie.) I enjoyed your randomness and your sillyness. I commend you for that.
Brick--Again--with degrading women because you weren't taught to respect them...to each his own. For the interactivity and slight humor behind this I give you a 2.5/5
Brick--For the random loop of a...whatever that was--your drawings were better than a lot of drawings I've seen. 1.5/5
Keep it up. I enjoy a laugh now and again. ^_^
The quiz looks much better in the Flash 8 version
Kind of reminds me of...
This kind of reminds me of the story between the two brothers in Trigun. Nicely done and better than most but could still use a bit of practice in one or two of the drawings. I enjoyed this also, for it's artistic use of violence and lack of ultraviolence. All too often, flash animations are created with the overuse of death, gore and blood. This, however, had merit--like a good kung-fu movie. Thanks for sharing it.
^_^
Thanks for the laugh. Well done. I don't, however, remember seeing credit given for the appropriate musician.
Awesome.
I wish I had seen this one before I saw the last. It's hard to know which one is the most recent when you're just randomly clicking. This film is much much better than Knock Knock Stab. But you have absolutely got to make them longer. I, myself am working on my own flash skills and hope to be releasing something near as well done as what you've done. I'm a sincere fan so keep it up.
I put a song at the end of "Genica" but it wouldn't export the damn file, so I can't make my flashes too long with mosic or whatever without the program ceasing to respond. *tear*
Immagination is good. There's no need for a point.
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